Re: hey!

> > fries, a childhood memory, the first time you did it in the back seat of a
> > car with a girl you didn't particularly like.  These are the e topics that
> Thanks for the comment, I absolutely agree with you, this has been one of the
> most insightful critiques I have read about poetry in a while, and I
> appreciate it....

You're welcome.  Thanks for the attagirl.

Got one for you.

                                 Ingenue

Handcuffed criminal
Apprehended in the act
Confessional sin

Transcribed by bored clerks
The jury sits, impassive
No lo contendre

In prison, he's taught
Skills to further his career
He learns so quickly